Memory
By: Lilly Cruz
You are a memory
Of everything that I love
They laughter on your face
And the stars up above
I remember all of the times when we used to dance
When we would sway with each other
Hand in hand
With all of these memories coming back to me
It feels like a my brain is a thought filled sea
As the familiarities come flowing to me
All I need is our one memory
One word to describe this:DEEP.
I love this! Especially because I can relate.
Lilly, this is incredible, I always look forward to reading all your posts. You are amazing at giving words that give vivid details. GOOD JOB!
I really like your poem! It makes me feel that you have to enjoy every moment.
I really like your comment! It makes me feel like you have to enjoy every moment.
Thanks for all the of the good feedback guys! I really appreciate it! I love that you guys can relate and understand this poem! More will be coming soon!
-Lilly
Your poems at beautiful!
Thank you Mrs. Hildebrand!